انجام اصلاح مقاله

با سلام و احترام، مقاله ای با محوریت داده کاوی حوزه انرژی که با کمک متلب و رگرسیون داده های کوره در صنعت فولاد بررسی شده است، ریوایز خورده و اصلاحات نیاز دارد. به یک همکار جهت انجام اصلاحات خواسته شده توسط داور نیازمندم. ایرادات گرفته شده به شرح زیر است: Recommendation: Revisions Required Greetings and regardsThis article is about modeling the energy consumption of a steel furnace. The structure of the article is weak. The article does not guide the reader well. Please consider the following points in your review:1- It is mentioned that the required data was obtained experimentally. This point is not mentioned in the article. Are the data determined by the authors?2- The simulation results are not well presented. For example, Figures (8) and (14) are incomplete, and the axes are not well defined.3- Some of the text seems to be a direct translation. For example, see the first paragraph of the introduction. It is written that in this study, which study is meant?4- What do you mean by MLP model?5- This sentence is given in Section 4 of the reference.In fact, the values ​​of the regression coefficients here are equal to and can even outperform previous advanced techniques \[35\].If you have noticed this from the simulation results, why is the reference given?6- What do you mean by the proposed model? Is the goal the same as the computational method, or is a model considered?7- The reference information is written incompletely.8- The text needs to be rewritten. For example, \[17\] appears in the middle of a sentence, without being referred to.9- Use new references. The review of the article should be better stated.10- Draw a flowchart of the simulation program and how to determine the shapes.Wishing you health and happiness.